Tuesday, May 16, 2006

Our Fight

A few hours
Like eternity

The heart feels
A wild tightening
The hours are drag
The day looks dim

My smile feels
Frozen on lips
A forced action
For sake of civility

The eyes feel
The need to cry
Tears somehow
Refuse to flow out

For the first time
Ever since we met
Your voice unheard
Your breath not felt

A few hours
Like eternity!

3 Comments:

At 10:30 AM, Blogger AmitKen said...

reached here thru CG. nice blog you've got.

you've brilliantly described with words a feeling which is mostly expressed with silence.. :-)

if you get a chance, do visit my blog, which has a random collection of my rants, my occassional flirting with poetry/short story writing etc.

-AmitKen
http://amitken.wordpress.com

 
At 1:44 PM, Blogger desertdew said...

Hi Amitken,

Thank you for your comments :-)

Sabiha

 
At 9:35 AM, Blogger Ulrica said...

Beautiful.

 

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